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CLOSE READING SHAKESPEARE:
A Course Portfolio
John Webster
Department of English
Box 35-4330
University of Washington
Seattle WA 98195-4330
E-mail: cicero@u.washington.edu
TEACHING GOALS
I've come to believe that the single most important thing I can do
for my students is to help them become active readers of literary texts.
That means that in every class I teach I deploy time and assignments to
enable students to find for themselves what they think a particular text
amounts to, and to show me by careful and consistent argument how they
arrived at that reading. Operationally that also means that I do relatively little lecturing as such, and that the lecturing I do do generally only aims to provide students with various tools--historical, critical, theoretical--with which they can be more sophisticated in the readings they themselves construct.
I will lay out how I do this with Shakespeare in the pages below,
but I will declare in advance that this represents a significant change
in my teaching. Indeed, I used to have goals which--from the outside,
at least--seemed much more demanding than these. Originally, I aimed to
teach a class that had a strong cultural studies component, something
that raised the question of "Who was Shakespeare" in a theoretically
sophisticated way, something that asked about the economic and political
implications of the Shakespeare industry and "Bardolotry"--the often
sentimental adulation ritually accorded Shakespeare by great swatches of
the English-speaking public. But when I subsequently asked students to
do themselves what we had been doing in class, I discovered that all my
discoursing had proceeded without the majority of students actually being able to read on their own and with any sophistication the plays on
which these discourses were based in the first place.
Having learned, then, that many of my students have great difficulties constructing even minimally complex readings of the plays they
read, I have found myself significantly redefining my course goals. By
course end I now aim at the skills I identify as those that underlie an
active capacity to read and respond with sophistication to Shakespeare's
texts. For me this begins by being able to see Shakespeare's language
as a complex and condensed medium, and includes learning how to pay attention to its rhythms, its metaphors, its ability to characterize its
speakers and to raise culturally significant topics of discourse. To be
sure, I still imagine those tasks as preliminary to more advanced work
as the quarter progresses. But in fact I have found the term pretty
completely taken up with teaching people to be active close-readers of
Shakespeare. For in practice students have found the attention this
requires very difficult to supply. Typically, by mid-term only half the
class will feel confident that they know what I am asking, and even
those need more work before they feel confident about actually doing it.
So my Shakespeare classes begin and end with active close-reading.
In this pursuit the great enemy is the ignis fatuus of "What Shakespeare
Meant." Students generally begin the class thinking I will be telling
them that, and they are often perplexed when I explain that I don't
know, and that neither does anyone else. We haven't the merest line,
after all, in which Shakespeare described his intentions in his own
voice, and he sure isn't talking now. Of course we have the plays themselves, but plays are collections of lines which become interesting precisely as they represent not what Shakespeare said or thought but rather
what Shakespeare imagined that some other being might have said or
thought.
Yet if we can't know what Shakespeare meant, we can ask what turns
out to be a much more interesting question: "What thinking does this
play enable?" In posing this question my aim is to suggest that Shakespeare's plays offer narrative and linguistic structures within which to
explore a great range of topics within his own time's cultural conversation, topics which audiences and readers continue to find relevant.
From this perspective Shakespeare's plays make sense not as they tell us
something wise, but as they enable us to think, talk, and write in compelling ways about such powerfully charged topics as (for example) power, gender, love, sex, anger, pride or civility. Within this framework,
my goal cannot be to teach what the plays mean, or even what various
critics have claimed about them. Rather it is to enable students to
become active interpreters in their own right, locating topics as they
arise in the plays, recognizing where and how Shakespeare offers a linguistic and narrative logic within which to explore them, and developing
reading strategies through which those explorations can lead to interpretive argument.
CONCEPTUAL FRAMEWORKS
My teaching of active reading begins from my understanding of what
prevents students from reading actively in the first place. Most are
unfamiliar with Shakespearean conventions and themes; most are also inexperienced with active reading strategies generally. But the biggest
difficulty people have is simply in understanding the language and
structure of Shakespearean texts themselves. That students have such
trouble should not be surprising. Most come to reading him through a
clutter of cultural cliches: some think he is great because
profound--indeed, profound beyond their humble comprehension; others
know him as a "classic," dusty and stodgy in the way that only a comic
book could recover; still others see him as a dead white male, and on
that account irrelevant. Moreover, his plots are olde fashioned--about
kings and emperors, maidenheads and cuckolds--and his settings seem almost infinitely remote in time and place. First millennium England is
deeply distant; Shakespeare's Mediterranean settings in the later plays
even more so. Antioch? Milan? Bohemia?
But certainly the most alienating feature for most of my students
is Shakespeare's language. It is laced with words that twentieth-century readers don't understand, has rhythms they don't recognize, but is
nevertheless (their professor tells them) full of interesting effects.
That all makes sitting down to Shakespeare a pretty intimidating matter,
and as they begin the course many students rarely find themselves comfortable even in just reading through a play. Instead they more or less
skim the text, looking to rely on what would go on in class to have
something to say when exam time comes. As one student described her
struggle with these plays, she would begin by reading the whole play
before we started it, but she would not by merely reading it even understand the plot. Then she'd hope that we'd give her a plot summary during the first class hour, after which she'd read the play a second time.
She would still be just piecing the elements together, but she'd get
most of it clear this time through. Of course, she would not yet have
paid special attention to any particular speech, or unpacked the metaphors which stud line after line, and except that this student had particular energy and diligence, I think her experience was like that of at
least half the class--and the class usually draws seasoned English majors.
My syllabus sets out to desensitize students to what is off-putting about Shakespeare's language by forcing them to slow down, go line
by line, learn the dialect as they go. They need to read slowly and
patiently, and I have two quarter-long strategies for encouraging that.
The first is oral performance. I once tried to have students memorize
and perform ten lines each from each play we read, but that turned out
to be too scary. Students passively rebelled, and the enterprise
limped. So now I have people simply read 15-30 lines each from the
first four plays, and memorize only from the last. That still leads to
a good deal of moaning, but the readings truly do get better as students
progress from halting, mispronounced, lifeless iterations of words on a
page to relatively smooth, sometimes even dramatic, "readings." I'm
sold on this. It makes the language real; indeed, for some students it
is the only thing that forces them even to "see" all the words in a given line. This activity must be well-organized, especially with a large
class, or it quickly spins out of control, but though students begin
with trepidation and complaint, they almost universally end up praising
it.
My second strategy for the language problem leads to the heart of
the course. For this strategy imagines that Shakespeare's language becomes easier as students themselves learn to see exactly how and where
its "richness" lies. To be sure, some students already have experience
working closely with the semantic logic of poetic language, but many do
not, and some of those who do seem to backslide under the pressure of
the unfamiliarity of Shakespeare's English. My way of handling this
problem is both top-down and bottom-up. For the top-down dimension I
supply through lecture and discussion a series of classes about things
to know while reading Shakespeare. These include introductions to dramatic structure, to the logic of metaphor, to how Shakespeare typically
uses formal devices, to underlying cultural narratives, to common issues
that seem recurrent in Shakespearean thematics (e.g., the politics of
power, or the transformations of erotic desire).
But these top-down introductions alone haven't made students more
active readers. For that, they must work with Shakespeare's language on
their own. This is not easy. Few students, for example, already see
how to notice where Shakespeare uses metaphor, let alone think about how
any one metaphor creates a particular semantic logic. Claudio in Measure for Measure uses a very powerful metaphor when he explains to Lucio
in 1.2 why he has been arrested: "Our natures do pursue, Like rats that
ravin down their proper bane,/ A thirsty evil, and when we drink, we
die." Yet students in my classes don't usually stop to work through the
implications of these lines. The inversion of word order is confusing,
"ravin" and "bane" are not words they recognize, and the whole simile
depends on knowing that rat poison works by making its victims so
thirsty that they leave their holes to seek water, and then, finding it,
drink themselves to death.
That is a lot to know just to construe three lines, and you can
see why one might skip past them. Yet unless one unpacks images like
this, the brilliance of Shakespeare simply disappears. Take its language away and Measure for Measure's characters become two-dimensional
cutouts. In this case to skip these lines is to miss (at the very
least) how Claudio's comparison complicates our understanding of his
character. On one hand he seems to accept in this line responsibility
for his action: he describes human nature as rat-like, implying a view
of himself pursuing the illicit sexuality of his relation with Marianna
as a rat seeking to quench a poison-driven thirst. But on the other
hand, Claudio's simile also tends to excuse him from responsibility.
For he phrases his simile as an adage that governs all human behavior.
Claudio sees not just himself as rat-like, but all of us. So is he saying, "Yes, I'm a rat, and deserve to be arrested," or "Yes, I am a rat,
but so are all of us, and thus I'm not really any worse than any of
you"? Or perhaps he's saying both, for his ambiguity introduces a play-long conversation about difficulties cultures have allocating responsibility for human actions. Who is finally to blame here for the state of
the State?
But the exact content of anyone's exploration of lines like that
is not my point. I really don't much care whether students see exactly
what I see in them. I do, however, care a great deal that they see that
lines like this provide precisely the kind of richness of theme and
character that Shakespeare's sophisticated readers admire, and I care
just as much that they understand that in order to develop that richness
they must also learn to explore the semantic logic that such figures
offer.
But how can students learn to pay attention to this extra-literal
dimension of Shakespeare's language? My way of helping them starts by
offering a method for what I call literary "noticing." This I provide
within the first few days of class in the form of a "What, Why, So What"
heuristic. Again this is something I describe at length in the course
packet; in brief it is a checklist that asks students to think of lines
of poetry as the consequences of authorial choices, and to ask about
them a series of three questions: "What choices have been made here?"
"Why those choices and not others?" and "What difference to our reading
does it make to have noticed that?"--or, more succinctly, "So What?" In
the Measure for Measure example, Shakespeare didn't need to have Claudio
compare himself to a rat, but he does. So in response to the question
"What choices do you see Shakespeare to have made in this speech?" one
answer is: he chose to have Claudio use the rat simile. That act of
noticing accomplished, the question "Why" then leads to exploring the
simile's semantic logic (in ways like those I outlined two paragraphs
back). Finally, "So What" then asks that we find a way to put the exploration we've been doing into some sort of interpretive relation to
the rest of the play. "Ok, so he says we're like rats. How does that
advance our developing understanding of the play? So What?"
In the early sessions of a class I like to spend time regularly
with What and Why. The third question, So What, because it asks that
noticings be integrated into a larger framework, is more difficult, especially when students are just beginning to look closely at what seem
to them to be the tiniest of effects. But students do get better at
noticing choices and formulating hypotheses (Whats and Whys); indeed,
they may even begin to feel swamped by the flood of observations and
hypotheses they are now able to generate. Those hypotheses will at some
point need to be sorted and judged--some even rejected. But early on it
seems sufficient simply to encourage them to range as widely as they can
within whatever zodiac of observation they can imagine.
Once students have become comfortable with noticing and exploring, I
then introduce a second heuristic, this one intended to supply a cognitive framework within which they can do the sorting and prioritizing
that the So What question requires. This second framework begins from an
observation drawn from reader response criticism, that a text is a
sequence of words processed by a reader through time. We begin a work, a
speech, a scene, an act at one stage in our evolving understanding of a
play; as that speech or scene proceeds, what we read/see affects that
understanding, changing it in a number of ways. I call this set of
changes the "process" of a text, and through that metaphor I invite
students to think of reading as the undergoing of a process in which they
move from one point of under- standing to another, the difference in their
understandings being the effect of what they have seen in the text.
Moreover, the process of a text described in these terms is
multi-dimensional, for even a relatively simple reading of a play
requires keeping several interpretive con- texts going at once. Some of
these contexts are obvious. Early in a play a speech often functions to
supply background information we need if we are to understand the plot,
while at the same time that same speech may also (for example) be
developing our understanding of the character who speaks it. Less
obviously, speeches also often have the effect of either starting or
advancing a thematic line. As I suggested above, for example, one effect
of Claudio's rat speech is to begin a play-long conversation about the
difficulties human beings have in constructing moral understandings of
particular human actions. Who is really at fault here, anyway? Claudio
for getting Julia pregnant out of wedlock? The Duke for not enforcing the
laws that have been on Vienna's books but unused for years? (That will be
Lucio's reading.) The society that could so unrealistically imagine
that a law would prevent human sexual nature from finding its way to
fruition in the first place?
So process is an important term for me; another I use to focus
student attention on the specific effects of words, lines and scenes is
"function." As I use the word it is principally an inversion of process
talk; if from the reader's point of view one undergoes a process in
which one's understanding develops throughout the sequence of a play, we
can think of that same process as but one part of a textual interaction
in which lines and actions have particular jobs to do, effects to bring
about. Texts (and parts of texts) from this perspective have functions,
they DO things, and thus the language of function allows me to ask about
a given scene: what does this scene do? What reason does it seem to
have for existing in the first place? Answers to those questions are
always convertible into the language of effect: "Shakespeare has Claudio make his rat comparison in order to frame for us a particularly animalistic, vicious view of human nature" is a functional version of "The
effect of this simile is to change my understanding of how Claudio seems
to see human nature as particularly animalistic and vicious." But the
conceptualizing of reading as function not only give a contrastive mode
of thinking to help students for whom the process metaphor isn't working, it also allows thinking explicitly about texts as linguistic constructs with both intentional and extra-intentional functions. For
while texts may be doing precisely what an author would like them to do,
they necessarily will do other things besides. This way of talking obviously opens onto issues of texts as cultural constructs, though how
far we get in class with such issues depends greatly on how far students
have come by quarter's end with more basic matters.
These are the main frameworks I supply within which I ask students
to integrate their noticings and explorings into actual interpretive
argument; the general procedure for the course then becomes an engagement by means of these terms with each of the five plays we read, and I
alternate in class between stretches when I work in lecture-discussion
format to model this way of reading, and stretches when I ask students
to perform it themselves.
CLASSROOM METHODS
Response papers and full-class discussion
My principal classroom methods are full-class discussion and group
work. For the success of both I rely heavily on what I call "response
papers." Students write about everything they read, and for virtually
every class session. The daily writing prompt is sometimes very simple
(such as a What-Why exercise like: "For your assigned scene, notice
three choices (Whats) Shakespeare has made in either form or language,
and for each suggest a hypothesis (a Why) to explain why he has made
that choice"); sometimes it is more complex ("Pick a speech from your
assigned act in which you see your understanding of a character change
in a significant way, and write two pages in which you first describe
that change as carefully and fully as you can, and then explain both
which particular words and phrases create in you that sense of change,
and how they have that effect"). But I always have students write something, and I work to make that writing seem necessary and useful by assigning only topics that become the basis for at least one of the class
hours to follow. Students thus always begin a day already having given
active thought to the issues I will be raising. Moreover, even when I
don't collect the writing (see Managing the Paper Load below), the fact
that discussion begins from what they have written ensures their knowing
that the writing they have done has made the class more productive than
it otherwise would have been. It's difficult to think of writing used
in that way as "busy work."
Group Work
My syllabus advertises small group work up front; some students
initially resist this, but most change their minds as the course
progresses. The group work I do, like full-class discussion, again
starts from daily writing; I regularly have groups begin their work by
discussing what they've written overnight. Because writing has assured
that students already have thought about the topic for the day, their
group sessions tend to be more efficient, and more students take active
roles in their discussions than otherwise might.
But writing will not by itself make group work effective. When
students complain about groups they usually say that the time in them is
wasted, that they would prefer wisdom from the professor to random observation and gossip from their seatmates. My strategy to head off such
complaints begins by stressing to students that the point of the class
is their learning to read actively--not their ability to summarize what
I tell them. Given that goal, group work that makes people feel themselves to be better readers will also help students find the format useful. I try to ensure that this happens through three practical guidelines: 1) Focus group work on a task that is both clearly defined and
intellectually challenging; 2) Give students only enough time in group
to accomplish the task (rarely more than ten minutes; never more than
15) 3) Hold groups accountable for their work by following group sessions with a full-class discussion of the issues the groups have addressed.
Managing the paper load
Obviously, writing is central to my teaching, but anyone who has
ever asked a class to write a lot will know that so much writing
presents at least two problems. First, few teachers have time to read a
set of papers for each class session--even glancingly. And second, especially if teachers don't collect the work, students can begin to resent the constant task, think of it as "busy-work," and only loaf their
way through it. That results in poor preparation and bad attitude as
well--worse than if they hadn't been asked to write in the first place.
As I've already suggested, my solution for these problems starts by making the daily writing a central focus for day to day classroom discussion. But it also includes the course Portfolio, a collection of all
student coursework, organized and submitted at quarter's end. This addresses the busy-work problem by giving students credit for all of their
writing--not just what I have seen during the quarter. And it addresses
the paper reading problem by allowing me to collect and read assignments
only three or four times. Thus while my students will write a total of
14 to 16 response papers, I actually read only four to six sets of them
as they come in. Then at quarter's end I can simply look over their
full collection of assignments to make sure they are complete and well
done. To be sure, some students skip assignments, or do them without
enthusiasm, yet in practice most of the papers I get reflect serious
effort, and certainly the quality of day to day work in the classroom
benefits greatly from the writing students do.
The portfolio also requires a short essay in which I ask students
to reflect on their experience in the course. I leave the subject of
those essays to them, asking only that the essay truly reflect some facet of how the course has affected them, and that they engage the task
seriously. Some students prepare a narrative of their class experiences--what they found difficult, how they solved various problems.
Others choose to write about how their view of Shakespeare has changed
over the course of the quarter. For my part, I learn much from these
essays. I've dropped some techniques when students have complained
about them; I have also been encouraged to retain innovations I might
otherwise have given up on. After the initial groaning about oral performances, for example, I might well have dropped them, except that I
have now read essay after essay describing how early resistance to the
idea became enthusiastic endorsement once students had grown used to
reading publicly. The Portfolio's reflective essays have also helped me
overcome my early diffidence about using groups, as students have repeatedly described them as effective ways to promote their sense of control over the texts we read. Especially those students who tend to be
quiet in full class discussions praise the opportunity group sessions
give them to try their ideas out in a smaller, safer place. And as you
might expect, I also read a good deal about how much writing I require.
I can no longer say as I once did that no student has ever complained
that I ask too much, but for every complaint of that sort, I get a number of positive comments from students who (sometimes grudgingly) give
the constant writing credit for making the class work for them.
GRADED WORK
Assignment Principles
In this course I usually assign three graded exercises: an in-
class midterm; a take-home midterm; a final, either take-home or in-
class depending on what seems best for the particular class I'm teaching
at the time. The principles I try to follow in assigning this work begin with the maxim: "test what you teach." That means (as my first
principle of assignment construction) that if close reading skills are
what I ask from students, then those skills ought also to be what I
grade. I thus do not ask students to write about secondary material,
or about what critics have or haven't thought about Hamlet. That would
work, perhaps, in a class in which students could already read well.
But for these early Shakespeare courses, my sense has been that first
things need to be first.
Second, I want graded exercises not just to test comprehension,
but themselves to contribute to student understanding of the material.
Thus I think of the first midterm not just as a way to be sure students
read the early plays carefully, but also as preparation for the second
midterm, and so on. And third, I want to be able to explain for any
graded exercise exactly what I am asking students to do. They ought to
be able to ask "What do you want?" and I ought to be able to give a
coherent answer.
In pursuit of these principles, the first midterm typically offers
a series of short scenes (or parts of scenes) from plays we've read, and
asks for a process/function analysis like that we will have done repeatedly in class. Even after 4 weeks of response papers and in-class practice many still do not find this easy; that's why my second midterm is
modeled on the first. I will add one thing or another to keep it from
being a simple repeat performance, but students need a second chance to
get the method right, and so that's what I offer.
For the final I find myself judging from the second mid-term just
how much the class can be asked to do. In some classes I have used a
large-scale, take-home version of the midterms; in others where progress
seems to have been slower I've stayed close to an in-class midterm format. In my most recent class I opted for an in-class, short passage
exam--something that would allow people to do one more time what they
had already been asked to do.
Criteria-based grading
My third principle for assigning graded work declares that I want
to be able to explain "What I want"--what will constitute a strong effort. That has turned out to be very difficult. For although I make
repeated efforts to state what I want, although we practice the process
in class, although I spend class time modeling answers for the midterms,
some students nevertheless find the sequential close-reading I ask of
them completely foreign. When students don't like my classes their most
common complaint is that I don't make clear to them "What I want."
Beyond what I've done in class, then, I've also been developing a
criteria-based grading system. If I'm teaching particular skills, and
if I know what those skills are, I ought to be able both to list them,
and then to apply that list to the work I ask students to do. As easy
as that sounds, however, it has nevertheless been a struggle. Although
I've been experimenting with criteria for a long time, I've only recently defined a set for this course which have pleased both my theoretical
and my practical sense. Those criteria correspond to the three major
components of the reading method I teach: Noticing, Exploring, and Integrating; for take-home midterms I add a fourth: Presentation--a
criterion that addresses issues of grammar and style.
Experience has taught me, however, that it is one thing to have
criteria, and quite another to make them work. Effective use of criteria requires not just that they be foregrounded regularly in class, but
also that students understand what those criteria actually mean. Indeed, unless students are introduced thoroughly to what the criteria
mean and how they are to be used, criteria can actually confuse more
than they clarify (I'm afraid experience has taught me that, too). I am
still figuring out how best to do this. In writing classes I've had
success with criteria-norming workshops, and that's an approach I've
begun to incorporate into my literature classes as well. This involves
students' using criteria to read and rate sample papers for themselves.
In my most recent class I ran one such workshop, but with just one pa-
per, and with only limited success; in future classes I expect to use
workshops of this sort more frequently.
STUDENT COURSE EVALUATIONS
The evaluation below is for the third time I taught English 324,
"Shakespeare since 1603," since returning from administration to full
time teaching. I used to say that it took three times through a course
to figure out how to teach it well; I'm less convinced there is such a
number anymore. The class went well enough, to be sure. Ratings were
good, and most students expressed a sense that they had indeed achieved
the principal goal I had set out: to feel themselves more confident and
empowered readers of Shakespeare.
But as I indicated above, there is still a bug in the operation,
and that is that as hard as I tried to be clear about exactly what "I
want," 3, 4 or 5 people in the class still never figured it out. My
hypothesis as to why this is true is that though I state repeatedly what
I want, and though we practice it in class, and though I list for students the criteria I use for grading papers, and though I even spent
class time both modeling answers for the first midterm and working with
a sample paper for the second, students nevertheless find both Shakespeare and the kind of sequential close-reading I ask of them different
enough from the other skills they have learned as English majors that
their experience offers them no way to connect themselves with "What I
want."
What to do? Maybe it's just that some folks will never figure
this out within a single quarter--and this particular class was a nine-
week summer class--actually two full weeks short of a normal term. But
I resist this explanation. Rather, I think that I have not focused
enough on what I learned to do in writing classes: teaching students to
be better readers of their own work. For some still don't see very well
what I mean when I ask them to "pay attention to language," or "be specific," or "explore the logic of literary language." Though clear
enough to me, and clear enough to most students by quarter's end, that
language still proves terminally confusing to some. But if I create
more occasions to apply criteria to the work of others in order for them
to acquire an operational understanding of those criteria for themselves, then perhaps even those last two or three will see better how
these same criteria can offer help for their own writing.
Given my continuing uncertainty about just why students feel that
this course is particularly difficult, the plan for next time will include developing ways of getting better feedback from students about
just what they are understanding and just what they need more help with.
I have also written a new section for the course packet that tries to
lay out the elements of the process even more clearly and fully than it
does now.
Notes
(1) When Cressida speaks her soliloquy in 1.2 of Troilus and
Cressida, for example, she tells us that she has noticed Troilus for
some time, and that she is attracted to him. That information advances
the plot, changes our understanding of the relationships between the
characters we have been watching throughout the act. But Cressida also
speaks in such a way as to change our understanding of her character
from anything we have been given to understand before. From what Troilus says earlier in the act we would think her an ideal paragon of womanhood; from her banter with Pandarus we see her differently again, as
witty, clever, very much down-to-earth. But with her soliloquy a whole
new dimension of her character is unfolded as she thinks aloud about why
she has not responded to Troilus' advances, even though her heart bears
him "firm love":
Women are angels, wooing;
Things won are done, joy's soul lies in the doing.
That she beloved knows nought that knows not this:
Men prize the thing ungained more than it is;
That she was never yet, that ever knew
Love got so sweet as when desire did sue.
Again the syntax here is hard for modern readers to unpack, but in these
lines we see a different Cressida. Though pursued with fine words by
the Trojan King Priam's son, she is nevertheless very much a woman precariously on her own, since her father has deserted the Trojans, and her
uncle, Pandarus, is busy currying favor to advance his own interests by
trying to seduce her on behalf of Troilus. In these lines we see her
aware of her danger. Vulnerable and defenseless, she is driven against
her will, both by circumstances and by the erotic ethics of the Trojan-
Greek world, to resist Troilus' wooing. For she knows that her only
power here is in remaining "ungained," in keeping "desire" suing. Ironically, of course, that very behavior, which she undertakes as a defensive stance, is read by the men in this play as coquettry. They label
her as wanton and flirtatious when she tries to use the only power she
has--that of manipulating men through their desire for her body--to preserve herself.
But again, my general point isn't about exactly how one should read
these lines. Rather it is that as readers we enter this speech at one
point in our developing understanding of Cressida's relation to other
characters in the play, and we exit the speech with a new one. We have
changed our under- standing of the plot relations, but we have also
changed our understanding of Cressida's character.
(2) As an example of how this works in practice I'll describe an exercise based on one of the writing prompts I cited above. I begin during
the preceding class by having students count off by fives, and by assigning an Act to each of the resulting groups (Shakespeare's plays, of
course, each have five acts in most modern editions). Then for the
overnight writing I assign the prompt: "Pick a speech from your assigned act in which you see your understanding of a character change in
a significant way. Write two pages in which you first describe that
change as carefully and fully as you can, and then explain both which
particular words and phrases create in you that sense of change, and how
they have that effect." When students arrive for the next class session, I immediately put them in groups of five, each group composed of
students who have written on the same act, and I give the following instruction: "You have 15 minutes to talk about the speeches you wrote
on. As a group, select from among your group's speeches one which you
can describe to the class as a whole. Go over that speech together,
becoming experts able to describe a) where your understanding is as the
speech begins, b) how your understanding has changed by the time it
ends, and c) what exactly in Shakespeare's language has led to your now
different understanding." I will leave them alone for the first five
minutes of this, and then I'll go from group to group, seeing what they
are doing, answering any questions that arise. When the 15 minutes is
up, I reconvene the class as a whole, and spend the balance of the class
hour asking each group in turn first to read their selected speech to
the class, and then to explain what they see happening in it. My part
is to prod with questions and to keep discourse from wandering too far
afield. The result (when it works well--it doesn't always) is a series
of student-based modelings of the thing many new readers of these plays
need most: how to develop a text-based interpretive argument about a
passage from Shakespeare.
(3) That sounds obvious, of course, but I haven't always been able to
manage it. When I err in this way it is usually by setting a task students are not yet able to manage. The punishment for such terrible assignments is having to read the resulting papers. They are painful because pointless--and it isn't the students' fault.
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